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Am I Obsolete? by snowball1948 Am I Obsolete? by snowball1948
"Just like all technology, one day I will be left behind for something more convenient. However, until that day I will do my best to make everyone happy. So... please~ don't leave me behind."

Re-creation: www.zerochan.net/716722



Well, this is the final result everyone! I really hope you like it, I worked hard on it~ :iconshyblushplz: It doesn't look as good as I wanted it, but I am satisfied with it. :iconorekibakaplz: Plus it made me super happy to work on it. :iconotakuingplz: Besides, it is my very first watercolor painting after all, I think I did well for my first time~ I just hope everyone else is satisfied as well! :iconyuisheepishplz: 

Anyway, it would mean a lot if I could get lots of feedback on my first warercolor painting so please comment. :iconblushthanksplz: And also, thanks so much just for viewing, it means a lot just to have people look at my art, thank you! :iconsweetblushplz:

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So as it is per usual, we all love to try new art styles. This piece, show cases a lovely connection to the title chosen by the artist, re-establishing the connection to the lifelike imagery. Although the Artist states that they didn't get to do all they wanted with the piece, done of us really ever do, and they shouldn't under play what they've done. Taking into consideration that this is the Artist first time using this style of art, it's important to recognize that although all art is yours and you can do what you want with it; remember to take into consideration that there is a particular style that accompanies the given style. Etc. Everything has a nice flow to it, yet there are a few places where there are some blockier lines cut against the flowing curved ones. The piece its self upon closer consideration, seemingly get more spectacular every time I glance over at it. It features, If I'd be so bold, a girl that perhaps craves and call for attention, yet among the spindles and zero g/ reverse gravity, we see an odd dark side of longing linger-ism.

Mind you this is just my ramblings; uneditited and from my heart: Yet don't take them to yours. Keep on Painting the way you want, love what you do, and Keep up the good work eh.
-TKS
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I love how it looks, very well done.
But, the gap between her collarbones could stand to be more narrow, otherwise, she's fairly proportional.
The eyes are very glossy, I like that a lot. She looks so sad too, in a very strong way. Her nose is a bit small though, but that does not need to be fixed unless you want your drawing to look more realistic. The mouth is proportioned well to the eyes, it looks good.
The hair could stand to be closer to the head though, since hair does that unless it's in pigtails that are held in with very thick holder of some sort, or if that's just that way her hair is.
All in all, a very nice drawing. Keep on going with the painting, it looks very good.
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:icontusdarryl:
TUSDarryl Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So much emotion...it's wonderful. I can almost FEEL this. :D Good going!
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :iconyuihugplz:
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TUSDarryl Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problemo!
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Chaoticotaku Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amaziing! I love it! =w= 
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you~ :iconsparkleeyeyuiplz:
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RadiantGloom Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student General Artist
This is so beyond beautiful!! Awesome work, faving :D
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Omg, thank you so much, are are so nice~ :iconuu-plz:
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RadiantGloom Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
You are welcome Llama Emoji 27 (Awesome) [V2] And yay thank you now I feel like such a kind person Llama Emoji-09 (Drinking Tea) [V1] That emoji may seem pretty pointless but I'll use it anyways because I love it :D
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
aha! :iconyeashplz: there sure some cool plz accounts out there... :iconzoomincatplz:
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RadiantGloom Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Ahaha indeed there are :iconjakewiggleplz:
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah! :iconfriendlymushroomplz:
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RadiantGloom Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
THAT EMOJI IS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
ahaha :iconyeashplz:
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Deathgod6721 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
Amazing work ^-^
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!! :iconyuiwahplz:
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:iconnokyookami:
NokyoOkami Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Wow Momo SO Much Improvment :iconfangasmingplz: I Can't Beleive this Got Lost in my inbox So Long
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh?!? :iconyuiwahplz: Thank you! :iconmahfeelzplz:
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NokyoOkami Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Hehee so Sorry I had Like 20k Messages  :iconyuicraiplz:
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Haha, oh dear that sounds like a lot of work to check!! :iconshockplz:
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Zophie-Chan Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Incredible work!! :iconsparkleeyeyuiplz:
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I feel a little bit sad when I see it, poor Miku:iconyuicry-plz:

 

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snowball1948 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! :iconclannadglompplz: And yeah, me too. :iconyuinodplz::
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MizoreSenpai Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Whoa looks even better colored, ya see you worry to much.
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
DAw~ thank you! :iconyuihugplz:
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RoXyBeaR147 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is absolutely beautiful I love it! I wish I could paint this well! Please keep painting! you are amazing at it! :iconinumeowplz:
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
hank you so much! :iconuu-plz:
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RoXyBeaR147 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're very welcome :iconinumeowplz:
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Aydat Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it ! 
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :iconbunnyglompplz:
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SketchyRae Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
I love the painting effect! :iconeweplz:
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:iconsnowball1948:
snowball1948 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :iconyuikyaaplz:
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SketchyRae Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
You're welcome~!! :iconwave-uplz:
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LillyKawaii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
OMG :iconshockplz: Momo... This... Just.... AMAZING!!!!! Its totally awesome I mean.... Seriously I have no words??? And it was your first time with watercolor?? O_O Congratulations, kee up the good work!!!! Yasuko Takasu (Fangirling) [V1] Heart - Free 
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
asdfghjkl;~ thank you SO much, you are really too kind. :iconuu-plz: Your comment made me SuPeR happy~! :iconclannadglompplz: :iconluvluvplz:
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LillyKawaii Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
No problem!! :D I mean it, you have REALLY improved a lot! :iconyuiyumplz: I cant wait to see more, so ganbatte ne!! :iconba-kyunplz:
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I'll do my best~ :iconmioclingplz: :iconluvluvplz:
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LillyKawaii Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
cant wait ^^
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Audience-0f-One Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love it! You, are scholar when it comes to water colors! Keep up the awesome work!

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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
asdfghjkl; thank you so so much! :iconmioclingplz:
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WildLilLavenderChild Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Impressive! :)
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :iconfanboyingplz:
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leafprojector Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg!! this is so awesome, Momo!!!! :iconhontoplz:
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snowball1948 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :iconyuihugplz:
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